http://maias-notebook.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] maias-notebook.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fandom_clinic2005-10-15 06:27 pm

In the Clinic

Maia lay on a bed in the clinic, monitors beeping around her.
She was unresponsive except in her mind.
She could hear what was going on, she screamed for help over and over again but nobody seemed to hear her. Tara, Tara I'm lost. I can't see you in the dark where are you? They are all around me Tara, help me somebody help me.

Re: Sunday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Tara? Where are you? Tara heard inside her head. It wasn't quite like Willow's telepathy, but it didn't feel like her own thoughts, either. "Maia, honey? I can hear you. I'm right here, holding your hand. Where are you, sweetie?"

((okay to play with the chronology? Tara's emotions during the day are heavily influenced by how Maia's doing, but Maia's not necessarily experiencing time the same way Tara is.))

Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 12:59 pm (UTC)(link)
After losing contact the previous night, at a most disheartening moment, Tara returns to Maia's bedside to try again. Putting her forehead against the younger girl's, Tara spoke. "Can you hear me, Maia? I'm right here, can you hear me?"


((Um, sorry, on what Maia can see: I'm thinking Tara's not as good as Willow was at it. More a feeling that she's there. Tara can probably see a little more than Maia can, because effectively they're in Maia's head.))
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe moves to Tara's side after the monitors start going haywire. She waits, trying to decide how she cane help Tara.

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Seeing Phoebe, Tara waves her over and gestures to the other side of the bed. "Help me? I almost got through to her last night. Talk to her with me?"

She turns her forehead back to Maia's. "Sweetie, I'm here. You're in the clinic, in a coma. Phoebe's here too, can you feel her?"
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe nods and kneels next to the bed, laying her head close to Maia's. She would do just about anything for Maia, and now for Tara. She clears her mind and tries to either hear Maia or lend Tara strength to get through.

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 01:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Tara looks over at Phoebe. "Can you hear her? Maia, honey, we're with your body, but you're not. You're somewhere else. I need you to tell me what you can feel okay? Shawn's there - who else? Can you see anything?"
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe nods. "I can hear her faintly."

Phoebe's eyes fill with tears at the fear and desperation in Maia's voice.

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Tara's hand reaches over Maia's body to grip Phoebe's, finally feeling a little less alone in her desperate quest to help Maia. "Maia, is this a memory? Is this from when you were taken?" She squeezes Phoebe's hand. "Let her hear your voice, Phoebe."
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe squeezes Tara's hand. "Maia, sweetie, I'm here. I'm not going anywhere."
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe's face pales as she hears the terror in Maia's voice. She's trying to figure out how to free her friend from the nightmare.

"Maia, don't run away! Please don't run away. It's what they want."

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
"Maia, listen to me. I need you to tell me how old the body you're in is. Can you do that, sweetie?"

Tara keeps her voice level and calm, but her hand clenches around Phoebe's.

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 01:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Tara nods, things starting to make sense. "You're not really there, Maia. You're inside your mind. In your memory. They can't hurt you again. Nothing can happen that didn't happen before - which means you can't save Shawn. Or the others. But you can find out what happened. Do you want to try to do that, or do you want to come home?"
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Re: Monday night

[personal profile] sensethevisions 2005-10-18 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Phoebe tightens her hand around Tara's, lending the woman strength as they tried to help Maia.

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
"You can't save them, Maia. They're not really there. It's just your memory." Tara takes a deep breath. If she's locked in her mind rather than out of body there won't be an astral cord for her to travel. How do I get her home? "Can you follow our voices, Maia?"

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Tara sighs helplessly. "I... I don't know how, sweetie." She looks at Phoebe, whispering "any ideas?"

((ooc: we need to drag this out for a few more days, right?))

Re: Monday night

[identity profile] brambless.livejournal.com 2005-10-18 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
"What's there, honey?" Tara keeps her voice as calm and soothing as possible. "Tell me what you sense."

((OOC: At the very least it's going to take Tara a few days in the library to research how to help Maia out. No overnight solutions!))

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